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I've nearly reached my point of breaking
hands are shaking
cannot move
I need to find some other way
to get away
to make it through

I can't tell you to wait for me
when you're already running
and fading away
I just want you to stay for me
to wait for me
until I've found my colours again

I've nearly turned to white inside
I cannot hide
the way that I feel
each scar appears
and all I hear
are questions, whether this is real

but could you tell me, once again
where this could end
if it be with me
all I want is some other way
to get away
there's truth to see

I can't tell you to wait for me
when you've got your plans
to get out of this place
I just want you to stay for me
to look at me
and see the colours returning again

I want out of this mess I've made
it's such a shame
to lose again
the only way is a path not tread
her eyes seem dead
from where she's been

is this the way it feels to be faded
so lost and jaded
without a choice
the ashes I've become can fly away
with everyday
that passes without your voice

I only need you to wait for me
to set me free
when time's running out
could you ever stay for me
or wait for me
until I can move once again

I've nearly reached a vacant landing
no point in standing
still till the end
I need to find some other way
to get away
and find you again
©2007-2009 ~FalseSolace
:iconfalsesolace:

Author's Comments

this may or may not become a song. i'm not sure yet. the words sort of spilled out of my head in a weak moment. so yeah. best way to write, tho.

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:iconchaoticartist87:
it's beautiful the way the emotion just flows all throughout

smile :)

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"I'll love you till death and beyond and to the eternal depths of my heart."

-myself-

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:iconfalsesolace:
what's odd is that each stanza really is aimed at a different person.. which may be why the feeling didn't fade off towards the end, as it can sometimes...

and I always smile, even through my tears..

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would you tell me
how could it be
any better than this?

143421011021.4:heart:
:iconchaoticartist87:
crying is good, just don't let your tears wash away your reality. instead, use them to clense yourself of the sadness :)

--
"I'll love you till death and beyond and to the eternal depths of my heart."

-myself-

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:iconfalsesolace:
i agree... i typically reserve the tears for one person now. and he deserves every one.

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would you tell me
how could it be
any better than this?

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:iconchaoticartist87:
:)

--
"I'll love you till death and beyond and to the eternal depths of my heart."

-myself-

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:iconfalsesolace:
:hug:

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would you tell me
how could it be
any better than this?

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:iconchaoticartist87:
:cuddle:

--
"I'll love you till death and beyond and to the eternal depths of my heart."

-myself-

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:iconfalsesolace:
...so, I am declaring...

EMOTICON WAR

:poke::glomp::poke::glomp::slow:

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would you tell me
how could it be
any better than this?

143421011021.4:heart:
:iconchaoticartist87:
i accept your challenge!!

:fork::slap::fork::slap:

--
"I'll love you till death and beyond and to the eternal depths of my heart."

-myself-

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:iconfalsesolace:
:eatshit::blahblah::hump::matrixfight:

...so that was a bit mixed up hahaha

--
would you tell me
how could it be
any better than this?

143421011021.4:heart:

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